Comments From Colorado!!

Thank you Donna C.! We love the honesty!

I just finished your book last night. I am a huge
reader (one book a week) and I've read maybe five
fiction books in ten years - don't like to waste my
time on fiction. HOWEVER, your book was excellent! I
know it's fiction, but I could see the truth in it and
I learned a lot.

The only part I did not care for (and you knew this
was coming :) were pages 243 and 244 detailing the
encounter between Brosnan and his mistress. We know
he's sleezy already, and I felt y'all could have made
it *much* more powerful by leaving out the raunchy,
smutty terms and left more up to the reader's
imagination. It almost ruined the whole book for me,
frankly. And to me personally, it made null and void
Jennifer's dedication in the beginning of the book. I
would not ask Jesus to read that chapter for me to see
if it was acceptable in His eyes.

I also found a few typographical errors. :)

Other than the above, though, Ces, EXECELLENT,
EXCELLENT book! You're a man of many talents!

If you ever want me to proofread your work, let me
know! I'm not too expensive! ;)